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Make a Difference

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

To start off, I really like the colors you used. The highlights look great, though the shading could use a little work, maybe try darkening the shading a little? The background is simplistic but for the most part works in this piece. I especially like the textures and colors used in the background, though I feel the purple near the bottom is a bit too bright.

I can't give much input on the words as I have little to no experience in typography, but I feel that the the "D" and the ending "e" in "Difference" are too close to the edges of the piece. Again, I have no experience in typography so I don't know if that's something you're supposed to look out for or if that is ok, but I personally feel that those letters are too close.

I can only find one thing to nitpick about with the anatomy, and that's the feet. I feel that they lack depth, which may be solved by turning them at an angle slightly.

Overly a very pretty piece, though a bit too bright for my own tastes.